I reviewed a paper about two men's deodorant companies produced by Kyle Stedman. I approached this paper thinking that it was an epitome of our advertisement project. I kept this mind-state until I approached the half way mark of the essay. I began to notice the lack of grammar and the common misspellings of words. I was disappointed, this essay was not a model that I should be getting ideas from for writing my essay. I in fact mimic the idea of using a scenario as my introductory paragraph in order to grab my audience's attention. The remaining issues with the paper are not within the context of the essay, but the overall essay and it's components. The essay just barely meets the 1000 word minimum and the works cited page consists of citations linking to Wikipedia. People that quote Wikipedia should take the time to go to their relative Wikipedia pages and take from the "references" section sources that are relative to the information they've quoted in their essays.
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