Project two was much easier for me to do than project one due to my previous inexperiences. On project one I had made grammatical, spelling, and logical mistakes within my paper. I've spent much time on project one only to realize that the time I've spent was wasted because I had created tangents. I am now more aware of writing in the active voice, transitioning, and removing useless words. The experience I've gained from project one contributed to my project two in the way that I had less time spent working on project two and more confidence. On project two I had the issue of repeating myself and going from one subject to another and then back to the first subject over and over. It was easier to rewrite my project two than it was to rewrite my project one because project two had all the on-topic information that I wanted, but only scrambled around. Project one had many off-topic subjects that I had to eliminate as well as change my entire main idea of the essay, ultimately having me write a new essay.
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